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I think this is something Joey, especially the ending.

I have been to work today, quite boring.

I came back to find out that the same people picking on Joey have started spreading rumours about me. I find it all weird, now I plan to catch up with posts and to relax.

I like the idea of this, they look great and each time they will look different.

I voted btw.

I think simplicity is sometimes more powerful myself, I like this and knowing why you write it. I think your should do you best to make sure more Notts fans read it.

These are good, did you shoot the pictures in black and white or was this done after?

Its nice to see meadow lane shown in artistic form on here.

/profile/8-goddessglamourpuss/\" data-ipshover=\"\" data-ipshover-target=\"http://poetryartonline.com/profile/8-goddessglamourpuss/?do=hovercard\" data-mentionid=\"8\">@GoddessGlamourPuss\'s suggestion does come across as solid advice.

The poem reads like something everyone would be able to relate to, which i like.

Reads well to me, I would not know where to start with suggestions.

Cute pictures but where is the ones showing the actual side of wildlife? Why are they all very much Disney looking?

I like the artistic side of this and because its sentimental.

Nice job, thanks for sharing.

The first pics very cute, really interesting photography.

Tis but a dark fiend that feels my soul

Red parallel and flight benign

In the toned sea alight by coal[/quote]This is brilliance at its best, very good poem!

#58

Poetry / Smoke Signals

October 03, 2015, 10:40:23 PM

Hi HAP, I enjoyed this submission of yours.

it is a romance
as much as madness,
this courtship of death,
an image in a cracked mirror.[/quote]Especially this above part, I also agree with SpaceMonkey. Try and get your writing published, its good.

#59

Music Production / Whispers

October 03, 2015, 10:37:16 PM

Youtube is a good way of getting your music out, i like this.

Thanks for sharing.

#60

Poetry / epiphany

October 03, 2015, 10:36:14 PM

Left with a sense of something greater.

Really, really good poem! I like the above part.

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Hi HAP, I enjoyed this submission of yours.

it is a romance
as much as madness,
this courtship of death,
an image in a cracked mirror.[/quote]Especially this above part, I also agree with SpaceMonkey. Try and get your writing published, its good.

#59

Music Production / Whispers

October 03, 2015, 10:37:16 PM

Youtube is a good way of getting your music out, i like this.

Thanks for sharing.

#60

Poetry / epiphany

October 03, 2015, 10:36:14 PM

Left with a sense of something greater.

Really, really good poem! I like the above part.

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Youtube is a good way of getting your music out, i like this.

Thanks for sharing.

Left with a sense of something greater.

Really, really good poem! I like the above part.