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It sort of looks like you? Self inspired?

It\'s good, which I see nothing wrong with it. It must have taken hours to perfect the detail - I think this is absolutely brilliant. I really hope to see more in the future.

PS.. The butterflies feel like magic, the glowing effect really adds to the artwork.

Ooo, I like the way this starts. It screams poetic and the opening bang just continues! This is a very explosive piece and it highlights why I wished I could start to form the reviewers team, as this deserve acknowledgement in my opinion.

I am sure it will, though what else can I say? It\'s superb and nice to see you writing again. 

Wars and talk showsCharred paradesMasquerades[/quote]This is brilliant!

Thanks for sharing and keep \'em coming! 

Despite the top of the sky being pretty bland (not being picky honest Miss). I find myself glancing up at it as I look down, it really does add to the whole picture. Did you have this in mind when taking the picture? By this I mean, realise the simplicity of the sky looked so awesome?

The bottom half has a lot of characteristics too.

Great picture! Keep 'em coming!

Today I went to the doctors, tomorrow I have to go back for a blood test.

I\'m really dreading it but I want to know what is making me feel so ill, it isn\'t really like me and I want to be focusing on the things which I enjoy doing. I\'ve been trying to put things out of my mind, as I am starting panic myself and I know some will probably think \'there\'s worse out there\' but bad things can happen to anyone. I\'m typically a coward when it comes to these things anyway.

These look good fun buddy, I like the idea of the book and it would be interesting to see more.

The pictures have an amazing amount of detail!

Thanks for sharing and keep \'em coming!

\"I Am\"

I dread the moment where I forget,
all the days that passed me behind.
And how I try to stumble,
through cohesion, I try.
Darkened mist blackens my mind,
and how I try, through emerald skies.
I close eyes shut & long for you,
It's too hard to dwell, I adjure.
I wish I could explain myself,
though I can't no more.
My memories escape,
It's who I am.
I accept my fate, I try,
I am.

His weary face aghast
Still stern and concerned
He look around, feel empty
For no answer he had learned

Another picture from \'memory lane\', it\'s good and I hope to see more.

I can\'t encourage this enough, P&A! Online wouldn\'t exist without your creativity Kate - so keep it up.

/profile/29-cwbunker/\" data-ipshover=\"\" data-ipshover-target=\"http://poetryartonline.com/profile/29-cwbunker/?do=hovercard\" data-mentionid=\"29\">@CWBunker - I\'ve tried suggesting that /profile/2-cheeky~k8/\" data-ipshover=\"\" data-ipshover-target=\"http://poetryartonline.com/profile/2-cheeky~k8/?do=hovercard\" data-mentionid=\"2\">@cheeky~k8 should take up using sharpie pens etc, hopefully she\'ll listen to your advice because she\'s good at what she draws.

I love the picture, majority of the older members should recall it.

It\'s nice to see a picture from the past and I hope with time, we may see more of your work because it\'s a talent which deserves to be recognised. In the couple of days, we must find time to purchase you some new art items and keep them a way from the children this time! They have their own.

Fab picture!

ready to fight- I am fearless- I believe in me- as the applause-rises up- I am calmletting the voices-refresh like holy water, I hear them call me-to soothe like a salve[/quote]This is really something Mike, you\'ve painted a picture of what it\'s like within a boxing ring.

Thanks for sharing! Keep \'em coming. 

Horror covers a wide range of things, which includes comedy.

Provided it\'s eerie, dark, etc it will be fine /profile/9-spacemonkey/\" data-ipshover=\"\" data-ipshover-target=\"http://poetryartonline.com/profile/9-spacemonkey/?do=hovercard\" data-mentionid=\"9\">@SpaceMonkey. It doesn\'t have to be scary, scary or on par with Saw/Steven King. Not by any means, just themed on horror for Halloween.

Your idea sounds a very cool concept bud. 

Hi Joey Thanks for commenting- I really appreciate it!..it\'s not any particular style- though thanks for appreciating it for what it is- For each piece that I write for- I try to convey a mood- a feeling- or an interpretation of a point I am trying to make- in that end- I was trying to convey what it\'s like for a seagull- or flock of them- in this write- and what it must feel like to compete for a single morsel of food- thanks for getting it.  regards Mike 

You did a great job portraying that Mike, really, you captured it within words very nicely.

Thank you for sharing the above, it\'s nice to see the insight behind the piece.

So, the football club I support has many international groups. With me running a fan site, I offered support to the groups so that they had some unique material - I started by offering cover pictures but I have done a number of other things to help them establish their presence.

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Obviously I tried to keep to a certain theme, though I am pleased with outcome with each.

Thoughts? Comments? Your favourite? Let me know. 

I\'d love to see any stories submitted here and I would eagerly read them.

Both your submitted stories I greatly enjoyed! I\'m looking forward to seeing what others offer.

The last one is sheer brilliance!

For me, I know I will sound picky but the lamp/light sort of ruins the first picture (I\'d photoshop that out myself). Yet each person is different. I love the fact you have turned them all into black & white, as we both know this shares a double meaning - since Notts are the \'Black & White Army\' and we wear the colours with pride.

Also, I really like the angle of the \'Iremonger Road\' picture.

Great job mate and thanks for sharing!