ignore the vocals lol    it's a while ago  

You do sound much sharper/used to singing here, almost like you have your groove and established your place. That said, I don't think anyone should ignore your vocals here.

I like the strumming/guitar work and lyrics.

Great job mate.

well..  the singing is not great..  but, seems to work here well...   a nice experimental piece..I like the whale sounds at the end  lol

Nice work Stewart, experimenting really does help.

cheers bud..  I do like experimenting