Title: epiphany
Post by: Call me Cordelia on
Post by: Call me Cordelia on
I wrote this ten years ago when I visiting my parents on their farm (where we lived when I was in high school). The photo was taken a few months ago when I was housesitting out in the country. So peaceful, so lovely.
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Title: epiphany
Post by: Chris on
Post by: Chris on
I really felt like I was within a field myself, as you painted the imagery nicely with the words. Just to be a fraction picky, I love the image but strongly dislike the font that spells \'epiphany\'.
Thanks for sharing Sarah!
I seem to recall it, perhaps you submitted it to MM or the old site?
Thanks for sharing Sarah!
I seem to recall it, perhaps you submitted it to MM or the old site?
Title: epiphany
Post by: stewart alexander on
Post by: stewart alexander on
profound and wonderful hun xxx really loved it.
Title: epiphany
Post by: SpaceMonkey on
Post by: SpaceMonkey on
Words on the right side of the margin......brilliant!!! I was going to ask is this based on an actual ephiphany that you had or you just wrote this with the subject in mind? Either way, it\'s great. I hope this is but a taste of things to come from you I look forward to seeing what your writing looks like now, ten years later. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Title: epiphany
Post by: Call me Cordelia on
Post by: Call me Cordelia on
Quote from: joey_matthews\" data-ipsquote-contenttype=\"forums\" data-ipsquote-contentclass=\"forums_Topic\" data-ipsquote-contentid=\"115\" data-ipsquote-contentcommentid=\"678 date=1443839141I really felt like I was within a field myself, as you painted the imagery nicely with the words. Just to be a fraction picky, I love the image but strongly dislike the font that spells \'epiphany\'.Yes, I had a different image with it before and the design was very dull. I like this version much better. I love the font for the title; it\'s an old script that alludes to history, specifically the enlightenment where poets like Thoreau and Whitman wrote pages and pages about the joys of nature...
Thanks for sharing Sarah!
I seem to recall it, perhaps you submitted it to MM or the old site?
Title: epiphany
Post by: Call me Cordelia on
Post by: Call me Cordelia on
[quote author=SpaceMonkey\" data-ipsquote-contenttype=\"forums\" data-ipsquote-contentclass=\"forums_Topic\" data-ipsquote-contentid=\"115\" data-ipsquote-contentcommentid=\"687\">Words on the right side of the margin......brilliant!!! I was going to ask is this based on an actual ephiphany that you had or you just wrote this with the subject in mind? Either way, it\'s great. I hope this is but a taste of things to come from you I look forward to seeing what your writing looks like now, ten years later. Thanks for sharing this with us. [/quote]These are the words I felt as I was laying out in the open field. What you read is exactly what I was doing and felt in the moment. ![](\"<fileStore.core_Emoticons)
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Title: epiphany
Post by: Call me Cordelia on
Post by: Call me Cordelia on
Quote from: stewart alexander\" data-ipsquote-contenttype=\"forums\" data-ipsquote-contentclass=\"forums_Topic\" data-ipsquote-contentid=\"115\" data-ipsquote-contentcommentid=\"682 date=1443869761profound and wonderful hun xxx really loved it.Thanks, my friend. At some point I\'ll get the hang of a multiquote lol
Title: epiphany
Post by: liam on
Post by: liam on
Left with a sense of something greater.
Really, really good poem! I like the above part.
Really, really good poem! I like the above part.
Title: epiphany
Post by: cheeky~k8 on
Post by: cheeky~k8 on
I can imagine it.Putting the image with the poem makes a bigger impact too.Lovely poem.