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Raven feathers, dark cathedralsRays of darkness guide ourHeroes. Masks and costumesMasqueradesFoul playA hero's day. Petals falling, scents appealingLove and courage–Heroes kneeling. Wars and talk showsCharred paradesMasqueradesAnd handshake slaves– Love and courageNo more feelingsPetals fallingHeroes kneeling... Raven feathers, dark cathedralsCharred parades withNo more heroes.

It makes you think of war and many other things, reads well. Looks like you have found your creative side again

Ooo, I like the way this starts. It screams poetic and the opening bang just continues! This is a very explosive piece and it highlights why I wished I could start to form the reviewers team, as this deserve acknowledgement in my opinion.

I am sure it will, though what else can I say? It\'s superb and nice to see you writing again. 

Wars and talk showsCharred paradesMasquerades[/quote]This is brilliant!

Thanks for sharing and keep \'em coming! 

/profile/12-liam/\" data-ipshover=\"\" data-ipshover-target=\"http://poetryartonline.com/profile/12-liam/?do=hovercard\" data-mentionid=\"12\">@liam /profile/3-joey_matthews/\" data-ipshover=\"\" data-ipshover-target=\"http://poetryartonline.com/profile/3-joey_matthews/?do=hovercard\" data-mentionid=\"3\">@joey_matthews Thanks a lot guys! I have a lot of obscure poetry like this and even some prose, but I\'m generally shy to post it. I enjoy writing \"obscure\" things, but I feel like readers would just get confused and think it\'s dumb hahaha I guess this poem had success among y\'all, so that makes me smile  Thanks for reading!

It makes me think of autumn and war. Its a great flowing poem.My favourite part is; Love and courageNo more feelingsPetals fallingHeroes kneeling...

lovely writing frosty...ars and talk shows Charred parades Masquerades And handshake slaves–  wish i wrote that   you have a beautiful way with words and easy connectivity

/profile/2-cheeky~k8/\" data-ipshover=\"\" data-ipshover-target=\"http://poetryartonline.com/profile/2-cheeky~k8/?do=hovercard\" data-mentionid=\"2\">@cheeky~k8 thank you! Yeah it does kind of sound like autumn now that you mention it  

Hi Frosty Kitten Awesome write!..I love your very descriptive words- it works really well here - a good writer- makes the audience think-to appreciate- and use their imagination- try to pick your brain- what are you thinking about- what are you trying to say-do they feel the same- do they get it?..that\'s the fun- good writing can be subjective as well as expressive- leave it up to the audience- that\'s what poetry is- make them take notice of you!..I have!..regards Mike

/profile/30-mperry/\" data-ipshover=\"\" data-ipshover-target=\"http://poetryartonline.com/profile/30-mperry/?do=hovercard\" data-mentionid=\"30\">@mperry thank you! I\'m glad you enjoyed it  

I do like this one too.  I really like the twist at the end that ties it in with the opening stanza.  It made me go right back to the beginning and read it again.It\'s kind of ambiguous as to who\'s fault it is that there are no more heroes.  I like that a lot too.  Thanks for posting Frosty  

/profile/9-spacemonkey/\" data-ipshover=\"\" data-ipshover-target=\"http://poetryartonline.com/profile/9-spacemonkey/?do=hovercard\" data-mentionid=\"9\">@SpaceMonkey thanks a lot! I was hoping that the last stanza would make the reader want to go back and see if they can decipher anything else! I\'m all about ambiguous obscure poetry haha