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epiphany

Started by Call me Cordelia, October 03, 2015, 12:54:43 AM

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Call me Cordelia

I wrote this ten years ago when I visiting my parents on their farm (where we lived when I was in high school). The photo was taken a few months ago when I was housesitting out in the country. So peaceful, so lovely.
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Chris

I really felt like I was within a field myself, as you painted the imagery nicely with the words. Just to be a fraction picky, I love the image but strongly dislike the font that spells \'epiphany\'.

Thanks for sharing Sarah!

I seem to recall it, perhaps you submitted it to MM or the old site?

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stewart alexander

profound and wonderful hun xxx  really loved it. 
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Words on the right side of the margin......brilliant!!!  I was going to ask is this based on an actual ephiphany that you had or you just wrote this with the subject in mind?  Either way, it\'s great.  I hope this is but a taste of things to come from you     I look forward to seeing what your writing looks like now, ten years later.  Thanks for sharing this with us.  

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Call me Cordelia

Quote from: joey_matthews\" data-ipsquote-contenttype=\"forums\" data-ipsquote-contentclass=\"forums_Topic\" data-ipsquote-contentid=\"115\" data-ipsquote-contentcommentid=\"678 date=1443839141I really felt like I was within a field myself, as you painted the imagery nicely with the words. Just to be a fraction picky, I love the image but strongly dislike the font that spells \'epiphany\'.

Thanks for sharing Sarah!

I seem to recall it, perhaps you submitted it to MM or the old site?
Yes, I had a different image with it before and the design was very dull. I like this version much better. I love the font for the title; it\'s an old script that alludes to history, specifically the enlightenment where poets like Thoreau and Whitman wrote pages and pages about the joys of nature...
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Call me Cordelia

[quote author=SpaceMonkey\" data-ipsquote-contenttype=\"forums\" data-ipsquote-contentclass=\"forums_Topic\" data-ipsquote-contentid=\"115\" data-ipsquote-contentcommentid=\"687\">Words on the right side of the margin......brilliant!!!  I was going to ask is this based on an actual ephiphany that you had or you just wrote this with the subject in mind?  Either way, it\'s great.  I hope this is but a taste of things to come from you     I look forward to seeing what your writing looks like now, ten years later.  Thanks for sharing this with us.  [/quote]These are the words I felt as I was laying out in the open field. What you read is exactly what I was doing and felt in the moment. /emoticons/smile.png\" alt=\":)\" title=\":) date=1443878710]
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Call me Cordelia

Quote from: stewart alexander\" data-ipsquote-contenttype=\"forums\" data-ipsquote-contentclass=\"forums_Topic\" data-ipsquote-contentid=\"115\" data-ipsquote-contentcommentid=\"682 date=1443869761profound and wonderful hun xxx  really loved it. 
Thanks, my friend. At some point I\'ll get the hang of a multiquote lol
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Left with a sense of something greater.

Really, really good poem! I like the above part.

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cheeky~k8

I can imagine it.Putting the image with the poem makes a bigger impact too.Lovely poem.