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Serendipity

All Words By : Stewart Alexander
ò Copyrighted 2014

 

 

Youth is thunder it hides in miles
Plagiarising contests of the storm
Unnatural colour subdued and caught
The oxygen refined and warm

Gentle meeting with anarchy personnel
Active duress on circled herds
My friend plies away my worst biennial days
Take the sun and wash its words

Serendipity closes down on me
Where beyond her fringes pain
I see a smiling fox through ages
Of the gently warm insane

House warming in winter
She takes the knife that stabbed him
Licks the blood with her wanted tongue
She yearns to be with him in his black silence

Mayhem keeps up in its guise
Within a blunted violin
Travel to the next reprise
To change the flavoured darkening gin

Sequins on the parachute
Charisma forte astound
Friends in empty pockets lie
I feel the ship the turn the hound

Feel away the burning flute
The music kill the devil
Enigmas drown the countryside
Fallen Angels on the level

 

 

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Powerful start, it absolutely gripped me and just the visionary used makes it so appealing.


In fact, it\'s the opening lines which I personally like the most!
 

   
      Youth is thunder it hides in miles

      Plagiarising contests of the storm

      Unnatural colour subdued and caught
   

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This really did catch my attention.


Keep \'em coming!

I will...  thanks mate
 
 
 
glad it gripped you!

Beautifully engaging. I love the pace and drama of this piece it almost makes me feel drunk to read it. The imagery is particularly hedonistic and for some reason I am particularly struck by \"the sequins on the parachute\" although I think my favourite part has to be
 

Quote from: stewart alexander date=1447424921Serendipity closes down on me
Where beyond her fringes pain
I see a smiling fox through ages
Of the gently warm insane

House warming in winter
She takes the knife that stabbed him
Licks the blood with her wanted tongue
She yearns to be with him in his black silence
   

so beautiful yet dark and sorrowful imagery.
 
 
 
 

thanks goddess that means a lot    glad it had such an affect on you  ..