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Title: With Her
Post by: stewart alexander on

With Her 

All Words and Music By : Stewart Alexander
ò Copyrighted 2014 

 Link To Audio :-https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D8bfmKpSpzw&feature=youtu.be 

  

She smiles at me from the winter's edge 

That lies beside the stream 

I saw this girl once before 

I think it was in a dream 

The icy water reflects her face 

She's beautiful 

  

I've never found the inner-strength 

To ask a girl to dance 

I see this turning my ways around 

To soak me in romance 

  

With her (x2) 

  

December sunshine on her face 

She's beautiful 

I always thought I'd be alone 

Wanting to be loved 

By a girl who sees me for 

A man she would adore 

  

I ask her out, with my heart beside 

The speed of light on fire 

Take her to a warmer place 

Where my soul is my attire 

Candlelight in her eyes 

She's beautiful 

  

I take her home we fall in love each and every day 

Natural life is a joy with 2 girls and a boy 

  

Title: With Her
Post by: Chris on
Nice guitar work! Very easy listening.

The lyrics work very well, I bet this is very relevant now? Decent recording quality also, well done mate. Thanks for sharing!
Title: With Her
Post by: stewart alexander on
it\'s an old one... but def. apt now  lol   thanks pal!
Title: With Her
Post by: liam on
Thanks for including the link to youtube, i enjoyed listening to your song and hearing your voice.

I am sorry I cant comment on the lyrics, I do not know anything about writing really but I am curious as to if you do gigs etc 
Title: With Her
Post by: stewart alexander on
thanks Liam.. I\'ve played live a lot.. just me on my guitar singing my own songs..  still play now..when I can..    my voice is stronger now.. thankfully lol   glad you liked it and commented.. appreciated!