The intro reminds me of movies like 'Dawn of the Dead', mainly because of how you have added speech - It's a good effect for sure. It also reminds me of artists (in a sense) like Angels & Airwaves.

It starts very poetic, a little slow but listening to the message is pretty captivating.

Great job buddy! Keep \'em coming. 

thanks mate..  got my dog my mum and dad in it... I asked them questions and recorded their first answer  

Quotethanks mate..  got my dog my mum and dad in it... I asked them questions and recorded their first answer

Thats very cool! I enjoyed listening to this, well done.

thanks Liam