After learning of a recent passing within my family, I found my head filled with thoughts and generally, when this happens - I find it much easier to let my feelings out.Moments in TimeWe live within moments, as time passes us by. And memories, are formed.Our lives, often seem carefree.When we live, within bubbles. And on occasions, these burst.
Until a moment like these, everything changes within. And the traits that makes us, who we are. Is the one thing, that is missed, when we are gone.
Title: Moments in Time
Post by: cheeky~k8 on
Nice short poem.. it does show a little of what losing someone is like. It shows that we tend to miss the little things about people.Someone thats not exactly family to us, can affect others close to us.
Title: Moments in Time
Post by: stewart alexander on
my thoughts are with you mate.. lovely little sentiment here.. good to write when one goes through these things!
Title: Moments in Time
Post by: liam on
Very sad poem but I think its well written.
Title: Moments in Time
Post by: HomesickAlienPoet on
This is a very poignant piece, an echo and reflection of what you are going through. Nothing bursts our bubbles quite like the loss of loved ones.