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Messages - Call me Cordelia

January 29, 2016, 11:58:53 PM
I really enjoy the deceptive simplicity of this!
Photography / Bulgaria
December 31, 2015, 07:59:04 PM
Stunning! Makes me want to save my pennies more consistently!
Photography / Venice
December 31, 2015, 07:50:55 PM
These are stunning and I am oh so jealous!!
Photography / Good morning, Kansas City!
December 31, 2015, 07:49:41 PM
thank you. it was a stunning morning, one I would not have seen had I not been running horrendously late for work! there\'s always a silver lining
Poetry / CHRISTMAS (deconstructed)
December 27, 2015, 08:09:12 PM
Quote from: mperry date=1451244116

Hello Cordelia
It is my attempt as a pause, or stop a thought, then to carry on.  I do use commas and periods in sentences and paragraghs when I write letters but for me when I write poetry, this is how I think it and write- I know it is unorthox, and for alot of people it is oft-putting, and I am sorry that it is difficult read- that is not my intent.  I will do my best in the future to keep your comments in mind when I post again.  Regards Mike


Mike, I was mainly curious as to the reasons behind the dashes. I enjoyed the piece quite a bit. The dashes distracted me, but now that I know their purpose they are less so.
Poetry / When Clouds are Mountains
December 24, 2015, 03:57:50 AM
You have to use your imagination a little because the photo does NOT do the vista justice... when I went for a walk this morning, the clouds looked like mountains to me. Since I live in one of the flattest states, it\'s the best I can do!

I titled the photo \"When clouds are mountains\" and then a poem hit me.
I used PicMonkey to manipulate the image a little and to add text.
Poetry / Quantum in Solace
December 24, 2015, 03:51:21 AM
This is fantastic! I agree with Kate, it is different from your earlier work. Plus, I love the vocabulary throughout. Very deep and philosophical. Kudos for using equanimity, especially!!
Poetry / A Gentle Slave To Calming
December 24, 2015, 03:38:22 AM
Always a pleasure, Stewie  Question - in the 3rd stanza, is the \"I die I free\" intentional?
Poetry / CHRISTMAS (deconstructed)
December 24, 2015, 03:36:31 AM
I\'m very distracted by all the dashes. Will you tell me what you intend them for? Are they supposed to be like line breaks?
Poetry / Juanito
December 24, 2015, 03:30:24 AM
Thanks, all.  Juanito has steadily improved since shortly after we visited him. He\'s now in a rehabilitation center and is starting to be able to move and talk (a little).
Photography / Good morning, Kansas City!
December 24, 2015, 03:21:15 AM
I\'ve been gone for a minute... end of semester is a busy time! Here are a few shots of a foggy morning as I\'m driving to work and from the teacher\'s parking lot.
General Discussion / Congrats SpaceMonkey
December 24, 2015, 03:11:16 AM
Introductions / Mused Morrigan the Mad
November 03, 2015, 01:23:54 AM
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Introductions / Mused Morrigan the Mad
November 03, 2015, 12:28:45 AM
Welcome! \"The Giver\" is a fabulous book